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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-06-23 05:49 PM

lets get lost together
lets let go of ourselves
its a clear bright night
lets watch the stars melt

into a beautiful light
thats caught in your eye
listening to the radio
i could die tonight

forever
is a long way off
hanging out on the overpass
waiting for the dark

its like im caught up
and time wont go on
looking at an empty sky
thats turning into dawn

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hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-06-23 05:56 PM

one of the great poems from you that make me go aww
Krysti

lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams
Junior Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 35

2 posted 2008-06-23 06:42 PM

great write

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-06-23 10:07 PM

Seconding Hunnies AWWWW

And moving on to say that that was absolutly amazing! a great feel good poem. (don't get many of those around here.)

There's a fine line between Genius and Insanity
I have Erased that Line
-Mark Paron

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

4 posted 2008-06-24 02:12 PM

thanks for reading it really means alot. i dont believe my work to even be worthy to be read anymore, so it makes me glad you enjoy them.

CO

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