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Katarina
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 15
AUSTRALIA, N.S.W

0 posted 2008-06-23 07:13 AM



Organ Solo intro..

(Spoken through mixer...voice distortion effects) Waiting...not ready...not yet...GO!
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Burning – Fire in my head...
Fury down below... (/End Speaking)

Rushing – In, out, in, out!
Let’s get this hard and fast...
Wetness on the outside...
But inside...cool and calm...

These go to 11...
Mine goes to 12.
Turn it up – go all the way.
Tonight, into the unknown, I dive and Delve...

Harder and louder; it’s starting to hurt...
I’m going faster and faster...
This isn’t my first time – but there’s still room for improvement...
ONE DAY I’LL BE A MASTER!!!

These go to 11...
Mine goes to 12.
Turn it up – go all the way.
Tonight, into the unknown, I dive and Delve...

Guitar Solo...

Chorus x 2

Organ Solo to fade...

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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
1 posted 2008-06-23 05:32 PM


makes me think of sex?
Katarina
Junior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 15
AUSTRALIA, N.S.W
2 posted 2008-06-24 02:40 AM


its not about sex
its about playing guitar
dont ask me
my friend wrote it

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