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Teen Poetry #8

Room 101

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

0 posted 2008-06-22 04:08 PM

Room 101

Here is pain
A self induced coma
Here it comes again
All that I fought under

It’s not the worst
Thing in the world
But I feel it so
Welcome 101

I never asked
To be in hell
Or maybe I did
I cannot tell

See the pain
And wonder why
So many think
They’re sane

How could I
Have survived
To care enough
Of him

He’s living
My room 101
The torture I knew
Somehow got through

Perhaps there’s
Been much worse
But I forget what’s
Been before

This is
Room 101
The worst thing
In the world

Help me Father
Send your love
Beat this Room 101
Send on wings of dove

There's a fine line between Genius and Insanity
I have Erased that Line
-Mark Paron

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

1 posted 2008-06-22 08:43 PM

how could someone not comment this......AMAZING.....talent you have young grasshopper......haha it's been stuck in my head so had to say it
anyways great poem.........amazing....

keagan

keep on keeping on--Joe Dirt

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-06-22 09:05 PM

Lol-thanks Keagan

There's a fine line between Genius and Insanity
I have Erased that Line
-Mark Paron

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

3 posted 2008-06-23 05:34 PM

the name drew me in...
and i loved it...
every word...
amazing.

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-06-23 10:09 PM

Thanks Mr. Orange that means allot coming from you.

There's a fine line between Genius and Insanity
I have Erased that Line
-Mark Paron

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