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Teen Poetry #8

Remind me of What it Used to Be

to_the_end
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0 posted 2008-06-19 08:30 AM

I wrote this poem, when a she died....

Remind me of what it used to be

Sitting all alone
Watching the stars shine bright
Lying among the dew filled grass
Waiting for your call from deep in the night

The pictures of you upon my wall
Shall stay forever more
You laughing, smiling, and staring at me
Remind me of what it used to be

We were the kids who were never seen
The ones who no one cared
And now you’re up for the world to see
Remind me of what it used to be

I’m not afraid to keep on living
I’m not afraid to walk this world alone
Were lying here with hands on the trigger
Remind me of what it used to be

Looking at the deep blue sky
Wishing it was again
Just dont waste your time on me
Remind me of what it used to be.

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

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1 posted 2008-06-19 11:47 AM

Beautiful. Welcome to PIP!

There's a fine line between Genius and Insanity
I have Erased that Line
-Mark Paron

hunnie_girl

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2 posted 2008-06-19 04:04 PM

such a good poem. Welcome to Passions. hope to read more from you
Krysti

Falling rain

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3 posted 2008-06-19 09:23 PM

This is amazing.. I know how you feel... Great work and Welcome to PIP!!

"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

I am the arch angel
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4 posted 2008-06-20 01:59 AM

First off i have to say...welcome to passions....number 2 here is that beautiful poem.. i saw "im not afraid to keep on living,, i'm not afraid to walk this world alone" my chemical romance song......famous last words was it? anyhow....nice write and keep it up.....and once again....welcome to passions

keep on keeping on--Joe Dirt

to_the_end
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5 posted 2008-06-20 11:54 AM

what that was in a mcr song?

Falling rain

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6 posted 2008-06-20 10:06 PM

Yep.. Keagan's right.. the exact lyric's... i'm listening to the song now :P lol..

Great poem by the way.

"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

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