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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
Sorry its so long. Comments are welcome. Happy: Terrible words Horrifying nights Shattered glass One-sided fights Try not to scream Try not to cry Moment by moment We always get by Pushed too far Danger real Drunken thoughts Broken deal Her red neck His blooming bruise Our shattered trust I have to choose Out the door Follow fate 911 It’s not too late Family ruined No more hope Constant anger Ways to cope Desperate actions I don’t care What do I do? Life’s not fair Band-Aid out Helping blade Thrilled senses Feelings fade Silver glint Sharp bite Dull tug Eased night Covered crimson Covered truth Stolen promises Stolen youth Raised memory Red line Broken recollection “I’m fine” Long sleeves Hidden skin Convincing mask Fake grin Humiliation Confused blame Questioned fault Ruthless shame “It’s not that bad” “It’ll never be” “I feel okay” Can’t let them see So many scars So many lies Repress bitter pain Smother harsh cries One more pound One less meal Love the control No need to feel “I’m not hungry” “I don’t feel well” “I just ate” Wonder if they can tell Clothes grow big Confidence small Feelings numb Dreams fall Pretend so hard Ignore the fear Smile over sorrow Can’t shed a tear Strength long gone No longer okay Life’s too much Slipping away Look at what you’ve done to me Hope that now you’re happy |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
I hate hiding, I hate lies, I hate fake smiles. And I don't know what to say. Words arn't enough anymore. You have my prayers. Keep writing, be as strong as you must, but don't fear weakness. I wish there was somthing I could say that could stop this whole thing...theres not. But it MUST be stopped somehow. If theres a price you could pay, PAY IT. Nothings worth that. NOTHING is worth what you just described. There's a fine line between Genius and Insanity |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I love this poem, but Earl is right; you need to find a way out of this, and I know you and Jake can. (Library) {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.." |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
hunn.. you need to get away.. no matter where you go.. its got to be better than where you are.. sometimes you cant stay strong.. you should tell someone... Krysti |
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eternally_singing Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123PA, United States |
This was a great poem-- but you need to get away. You and your brother should not have to deal with this. Please tell someone. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Everyone here is writing and supporting you.. Please tell someone.. no one or no thing should ever feel pain like this... run away if you want to... Please tell someone who can help!!! Or tell anyone! I don't care who, you need to do something!!! ~The Lord is my light and my salvation; Whom shall I fear? The Lord is the strength of my life; Of whom shall I be afraid?... Through an army may encamp against me, My heart shall not fear; Through war may rise against me, In this I will be confident.~ Psalm 27:1, 3 I'll be praying for you.. May God bless.. "It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker. |
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