Teen Poetry #8 |
Lies |
HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
Lies She sobs and cries As her spirit dies He raises his hand And it sharply flies She falls to the floor Crawls to the door He kicks her aside And hits her some more “Stop, stop!” she pleads Yet he pays no heed Then he walks off laughing And leaves her to bleed She limps to the bed Lays down her head Closes her eyes And wishes she was dead Heavy footsteps draw near She wipes off her tears He opens the door And she’s laced with fear His blue eyes are glazed He seems very dazed He halts in front of her Bloody fist raised The he looks down Faced etched in a frown He takes a deep breath And lets his fist down “I love you,” he sighs Then slowly he cries “It wont happen again.” But she sees through his lies |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
They're not lies. Just how he sees the truth at the moment. I've never been so truly angry before. No one has that right! No one should be allowed to do things like that. Library There's a fine line between Genius and Insanity |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
He does love you. Even if he hurts so often there is no way you could believe it. Stay strong and be safe. Library. {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.." |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohh Danielle such a harsh sad poem.. keep strong! best wishes always Krysti |
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eternally_singing Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123PA, United States |
Praying things get better for you. Keep strong ~library~ |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Frank is right.. He will notice of what he has done.. It might be hard for him to stop.. It hurts him more then you think.. Give him a chance but don't let your gaurd down... "It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker. |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Wow - this is beautiful in a very sad way. Very well done, heartfelt, and true poem. |
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