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Nobdy should drink alone.. (In rememberence of a lost friend)
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Nobdy should drink alone.. (In rememberence of a lost friend) |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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Your sitting at home with whiskey on your breathe. A candle lit dinner set for one. No matter how many times you drink away the ghost of your past. You still end up sitting on your own. The rain's pouring outside but you really don't seem to care. And all you can do is drink down the pain. But no matter how many times you fill that little empty glass. You just don't cry like the storming rain. You convince yourself that your the only one. To feel this heart break, a broken song. The heart break will be there for quite some time. But like the full glass, it won't stay for long. Outside you can hear what sounds like thunder roar. Althought its rolling miles away. But sooner or later the night will slowly come to an end. And you start to see the light of day. Memories flood the mind that your despretely trying to kill. With one more shot your life is done. Please don't dareling, I wouldn't be able to stand the pain. You' don't want to end this way. not like this broken song. (Writtin to be a song but still in memory of my friend, Keagan.) "It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Absolute truth... thank you for sharing this not only for Keagen, but for all you touch.  |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
... Library wow  ... There's a fine line between Genius and Insanity I have Erased that Line -Mark Paron |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
such a strong piece of work.. miss being here!!! love this Krysti |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
wow. i know what its like man! drinking alone sucks. |
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wisdomofthesword Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224the last place on earth |
wow very emotional but great poem, thanks for shearing I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
Zach Zach Zach Zach Zach, amazing write. I know how it feels for this to happen. Library, once again...amazing. ~*Julianna*~ |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Wow Zach - I'm glad you were able to pen that. I hope it helped ease the pain to be able to write a great tribute like that. Take care guy! |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
zach this was so good!!! made tears well up in my eyes. ugh so good!!! i'm lost and going nowhere |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
*Zach's jaw hangs open in shock* Wow I didn't relize so many people would like my poem! Yes Deb it did help.. a little..Thank all you guys for reading!! ~Zach~ |
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