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Teen Poetry #8

Dear God

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

0 posted 2008-06-30 02:43 PM

Dear God

God, you promised I’d be okay,
When he up and walked away.

So why am I here on the floor?
Watching my heart walk out the door…

How could anyone be this cruel,
I now I broke more than one rule.

But you said he’d never leave,
Was that just one of those stupid dreams?

I’m just not sure what to do,
‘Cause you’re gone and I still miss you.

But I guess it’s time to just move on,
Even if that means that you’re gone.

But God, just know, I’m mad at you;
‘Cause you’re the one who let me fall through.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-06-30 04:14 PM

aww Brittany sweetie this is such a sad poem.. but you are a talented writer and i'm glad to see you back around here again

Krysti

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

2 posted 2008-07-01 01:28 PM

yes its very sad, but thiers alot of beauty in it as well. great write.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-07-01 07:30 PM

Awe This is truely sad. But like what Clockwork_Orange said its still beautiful. Great work!!

But of the tree of knowledge of good and evil,
thou shalt not eat of it;
for in the day that thou eatest thereof
thou shalt surely die.

Genesis

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