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The Oblivion of a Black and White World
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The Oblivion of a Black and White World |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland 
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A white flower in a black world, A bright sun in the dark night. So different from the rest, So beautiful. Dancing she'll go, gracefully about. Oblivious that she is not the only one. Watching her as she goes, planing all along. Waiting for the perfect time for the white flowers death. She'll scream and fight to save her ending, Thrash and kick untill it's done. They'll laugh and smile as the job is done, Oblivious that they are not the only ones. {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.." |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Brilliance! Sheer complete BRILLIANCE!!! Headed right for my library! Maybe it's time to tell the TRUTH |
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I am the arch angel Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167nowhere,illinois,USA |
can we say....................BEAUTIFUL....................... The poem you've written is as beautiful as the wondrous girl who wrote it.......fantastic keep on keeping on--Joe Dirt |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Wow.. Absolutly stunning.. Emily your an amazing writer and with that great imganary talent, you will be one of the greatest poet the world will ever know!
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
haha zach you're starting to sound like Jess! But thanx anyway, {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.." {~Emily~} |
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