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Earl Robertson
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0 posted 2008-06-16 06:59 PM


Water

Run with me Water
Let me drink my fill

Stay from me Cold
Seize not thou my heart

And Fire, you also
Shall keep a wide berth

Through warm and cool Waters
Save me Lord, my own

Run with me Water
My savior and my friend

Bring me my Redeemer
Teach me to be saved

Run from us fire
Confusion shall be gone

Support me mortal Water
And I will sing for you


Maybe it's time to tell the TRUTH

© Copyright 2008 Frank Robertson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-06-16 07:35 PM


Inspirering (sp?) Frank.. Great work!


"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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2 posted 2008-06-18 01:26 PM


love the aladin quote. So, I love the living waters poem. Thanks for your insight. it is always marked.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Earl Robertson
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3 posted 2008-06-18 09:12 PM


Oh right...I wrote this!

Thanks guys! lol Rofl

There's a fine line between Genius and Insanity
I have Erased that Line
-Mark Paron

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