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XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-06-11 11:23 PM

~~I just had to write, so this is the first thing that came to mind.

I see you in the sunlight,
though you shine even brighter in the dark.
I know you wont abandon me,
I know you'll always be the one moon in the sky.
The only one who wont ever leave me,
the one I can trust to always come back.
The one that shines the brightest she can when everything else is dark.
The one that can guide me,
the one that wont leave.
The only one I'll know forever.
The Moon.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-06-12 01:10 PM

This is great! Actualy reminds me of a friend...

Only the insane are strong enough to prosper...
Only those who prosper can truly judge what is sane.

Saya_lost_soul
New Member

since 2008-06-12

Posts 7
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-06-12 01:13 PM

Oh! wow, I know I'm new at this.
But your poem is soul deep, I love it!

HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

3 posted 2008-06-12 01:19 PM

I really like it. Nice job

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-06-12 01:19 PM

Wow.. love it!! (Library)

"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2008-06-12 05:55 PM

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

6 posted 2008-06-12 06:58 PM

Awesome poem em. once again, a masterpice. Library, luv ya lots!!

~*Julianna*~

Six Semper Tyrannas - Thus always to tyrants...

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

7 posted 2008-06-15 03:51 AM

Tori,....this is good...i've missed pip...where did i go? oh yeah...i've been on a writers block love it.....great job

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

8 posted 2008-06-15 07:55 PM

Sorry to break it to ya' Keagan.. but this is Emily (Forever.Broken) not Tori (shatter_smiles)...lol... Its been a long time hasn't it?

"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

9 posted 2008-06-19 01:39 AM

ohhh wow Emily!!!! this was soo guud one of my favs by you.. weird to see me back lol didnt think id ever come back....
Krysti

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