Teen Poetry #8 |
Im trying |
lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams Junior Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 35 |
i need you now more than ever because i cant stand this pressure my heart and sole are lost because of everything i've been through I'm trying to understand how much i need you, but through all this fog i cant really see you my heart is taking steps but i dont know where they lead to |
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yourfriendmacaroni New Member
since 2008-06-14
Posts 7United States |
Good poem, I really enjoyed it! I hope you find who or what you're looking for. I can never seem to figure it out for myself either ;] |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
nice JJ |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Hey this is a pretty good poem.. I hope your doing well.. Keep up the writing!!
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