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Teen Poetry #8

Im trying

lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams
Junior Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 35

0 posted 2008-06-13 06:31 PM

i need you now
more than ever
because i cant
stand this
pressure

my heart and
sole are lost
because of everything
i've been through

I'm trying to understand
how much i need
you, but
through all this fog
i cant really see you

my heart is taking
steps
but i dont know
where they lead to

yourfriendmacaroni
New Member

since 2008-06-14

Posts 7
United States

1 posted 2008-06-15 12:28 PM

Good poem, I really enjoyed it!

I hope you find who or what you're looking for. I can never seem to figure it out for myself either ;]

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-06-17 05:50 PM

nice

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-06-17 07:20 PM

Hey this is a pretty good poem.. I hope your doing well.. Keep up the writing!!

"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

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