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Saya_lost_soul
New Member

since 2008-06-12

Posts 7
BC, Canada

0 posted 2008-06-12 01:01 PM

Blue like sapphire beneath a morning sun,
Burning with fire of a crystalline soul.
A laughter the never quite reaches inside,
Where secrets weather like untoched gold.

Skin like ivory, perfect; A goddess, she must be.
Slender fingers, unadorned; beautiful simplicity.
A single teardrop; when did it fall?
Could this goddess be mortal, after all?

Fantasy, a shining goddess,
She controls the tides.
Fantasy, a brilliant goddess,
She controls our lives.

Fantasy, a golden goddess,
In her hands is the light.
Fantasy, a silver goddess,
In her hands is the night.

Cold as winter, strong as stone;
She faced the darkness all alone.
A silver goddess; a reflection.
A mirage; a recollection.
No return; no turning back.
The past is gone, the future, black.
Serpents gather in their nest.
And she stands above the rest.
Shadows hunt; she hunts the shadows.

The moon is risen; she stands below.
She views her world through eyes of others.
Black and white; there are no colours.
As she looks down upon a shattered youth.
A shattered mirror shows a shattered truth.

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-06-12 01:04 PM

WELCOME TO PIP!!!!!!!!!

Great (deep) first poem by the way! (headed to the library!)

ps you made me think

Only the insane are strong enough to prosper...
Only those who prosper can truly judge what is sane.

eternally_singing
Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

2 posted 2008-06-12 04:03 PM

Absolutely stunning. Amazing first poem and WELCOME TO PIP! Looking forward to reading more

Anyone odd is normal, and anyone normal is odd...

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-06-16 09:55 PM

I love this. I'm not entierly sure what it's about yet but I'm sure that's just me. Fantastic job and Welcome to pip. Library.
Hope to see more soon.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2008-06-19 01:52 AM

Saya, welcome to Passions.. I hope it grows on you like it has grown on me... everytime I leave im alway back.... Great beautifully written first poem.. wish mine was this good lol
Krysti

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