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I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2008-06-15 03:46 AM

I haven't written in a long time and i am just sitting in bed with my laptop at 3 in the morning and i decided to write.................i was thinking of all the times i put my heart on the table for it to be crushed.........but they're was one girl that i couldn't stay away from but got hurt every time i went back........i'm so dumb......but heres a poem so....enjoy?
"Broken,Beaten,Forgotten,and Stranded"
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So close to just breaking down
I might as well just get up and leave town
I'm sure i wont be missed
Cause all you do is get me lost in the mist

Why am i so different you ask?
Because i don't hide behind a mask
I'm me and me only
If you aren't fake then show me

You told me i gave your life a special glow
If you loved me then why did you let me go?
If i said i could rule the world would you believe?
Every time you see someone better you just leave

Since your someone i won't be missing
That last poem was for you but you didn't listen
Forgotten and beaten on the outside
Emotionally dead on the inside

Thank you for making me feel this way
You left me stranded and all i can say
I thought i loved you
but you broke me apart and now i freaking hate you!!!

earn your freedom of the charge of sacrificing your life for others

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-06-15 06:19 PM

I'm sorry.
Glad to see you back here though.

We all wear masks.

Logic is Imaginary
Truth is only as Logical as we Pretend it is...rofl

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-06-15 07:51 PM

I'm sorry Keagan... really I am...

I agree with Frank.. ^^^

We all wear mask to a certain extent...

But I'm glad you got back to writing....

"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-06-15 09:50 PM

Im glad you finaly could write about it, and it's a lovely poem.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

4 posted 2008-06-16 06:02 PM

Great poem. Nice to have you back and writing. Library.

~*Julianna*~

Six Semper Tyrannas - Thus always to tyrants...

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2008-06-19 01:49 AM

oh Keagan.. this was rally amazing.. so much emotion.. def. one of my favorite poems ive read from you.
Krysti

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