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HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02
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New Jersey

0 posted 2008-06-12 11:28 AM


Deep Red

Deep red
Bleed out the all of fears
Laughing the whole time
Because I’m so past tears

Deep red
Drench my skin in colored pain
Drop by drop, feel the release
My own cleansing crimson rain

Deep red
Feel the pull of all life’s hate
Focus on the silver kissing my skin
Come to terms with my fate

Deep red
Remember his drunken nights
Furious because my dad was weak
Furious for sharp fists during fights

Deep red
Close my eyes tight and subdue
Wrap myself in the physical grief
Ignore what I’ve been through

Deep red
Savior in crimson and a razor blade
Smile instead of breaking down
Bask in pretense as feelings fade

Deep red
Build my wall against bitter truth
Wish it could all be different
Look hard at a child’s broken youth

Deep red
Press hard, watch it stain hope
Hey “look on the bright side”
I’ll live through this way to cope

Deep red
I was a little girl when my dad hit me
And it hurts so much to face
Someone…listen to my bloody plea

Only so strong because I’m so wrong
Help me escape my world where hates unfurled

© Copyright 2008 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
1 posted 2008-06-12 12:52 PM


Library. Crying in sorrow like I've never cried before.

Only the insane are strong enough to prosper...
Only those who prosper can truly judge what is sane.

HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02
Posts 137
New Jersey
2 posted 2008-06-12 08:03 PM


aww I'm sry didn't mean to make you cry
Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
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BC, Canada
3 posted 2008-06-12 08:17 PM


Don't be sorry. Never be sorry if your message is sad.

Only the insane are strong enough to prosper...
Only those who prosper can truly judge what is sane.

HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02
Posts 137
New Jersey
4 posted 2008-06-12 08:26 PM


ok but still I'm sry
Earl Robertson
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Posts 753
BC, Canada
5 posted 2008-06-12 08:42 PM


Lol thanks haha

Only the insane are strong enough to prosper...
Only those who prosper can truly judge what is sane.

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