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Teen Poetry #8

My Brother Jake

HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-06-12 04:20 PM

This is really one of my worst poems i like ever written but comments are welcome =] thanks.

My Brother:

Jakey
Have I ever told you how much I love you?
How I am proud of the things you do?
The way you laugh with your older sister
The way you are so innocent and so sensitive

Never losing sight of who you are
I am proud of every little thing you do
Whether its practicing your ABC's
Or kicking the ball in the yard

It just baffles my mind.
I know we fight
But I want you to know
It's because I care

You are a sweet little boy
With the sticky little hands
Who is always smiling
Wearing your pooh bear snow boots
And carrying around your Elmo

You don't always listen to the things I say
That doesn't mean I love you any less
I want you to know that you'll be alright
No matter what happens every night

I want to share with you some wisdom;
Don't be afraid of who you are,
Love yourself and respect others,
Listen to your heart and not your head,
And remember,
No matter what happens,
I am always here for you.

You are the most wonderful little brother
I would never change a thing about you
I'm blessed to be your big sister
And your friend.

I love you Jake

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-06-12 05:53 PM

This is so sweet. But be sure to take your own advice before you give all of it away. Trust yourself and be strong.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-06-12 06:27 PM

In full agreement over here. Exelent job and some good advice.

Only the insane are strong enough to prosper...
Only those who prosper can truly judge what is sane.

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