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keelin
New Member

since 2008-06-07

Posts 4

0 posted 2008-06-07 09:23 PM

Alone in crowded lonliness
Against the wall I stand
Rhythemic beating in my chest,
A note clutched in my hand

A tear escapes my clouded eyes
My feet refuse to move
As people go on with their lives
I waste my afternoon

I fumble with the folded note
Its contents I must hide
The sadness in the words I wrote
Told truth beyond the lies

Some people are never noticed
Against the wall they stand
Believing they will not be missed,
The choice is in your hands

For they are people left behind
Burdened by our neglect
Within your soul, i hope you find,
Outcasts deserve respect

© Copyright 2008 keelin - All Rights Reserved

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-06-07 11:14 PM

Truth is always better than lies. Always.
Heres a healthy dose of respect from me! And a not so healthy, ear shattering
WELCOME TO PIIIIP!!!!!!!!!

Sanity is NOT a matter of statistics.
The earth is round, germs cause desease, and God speaks.

I am insane of course BUT STILL!!

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

2 posted 2008-06-08 03:08 PM

I love this poem. Great write. Library, and welcome to pip!

~*Julianna*~

Six Semper Tyrannas - Thus always to tyrants...

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-06-08 06:41 PM

Wow how I know this feeling all too well.. Great work!! And Welcome to PIP!!

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"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

eternally_singing
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since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

4 posted 2008-06-08 07:39 PM

Very well done! I love it and WELCOME TO PIP!

Anyone odd is normal, and anyone normal is odd...

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2008-06-08 09:32 PM

wow, I really liked this. Fantastic write, I hope to see more soon, and welcome to PIP.

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{~Emily~}

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