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HersheyKiss
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0 posted 2008-06-07 10:11 AM


Easy Way Out...

Anger and hatred
Is all I seem to be making
Happiness and acceptance
Is swept aside as if I were faking

What did I do to deserve this?
All the good things in life I seem to miss
I feel as though I'm innocent
It just doesn't all seem to fit

Should I take the easy way out?
Not many people will miss me without a doubt
What would happen if I didn't even exist?
Everyone will be at their peak of happiness

But for the few people that would miss me
Don't get any ideas to come join me
For I have made a terrible mistake
No other one shall make

If I made an impact on anyone's life
I am sorry I decided to take my life
I just had to find an easy way out
I'm just someone you are better without

© Copyright 2008 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-06-07 10:40 AM


No your not. I would be devistated if you were gone. Please the easy way out is not always the best choice! Just hold on in there.. Things will get better..  


"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

XxForever.BrokenxX
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2 posted 2008-06-07 12:15 PM


We would miss you. And telling yourself that we wouldn't is only a huge lie. You will get through this, I know you can. Great poem btw...

          {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
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3 posted 2008-06-07 01:01 PM


Danielle I don't know what to say.
If you killed yourself I would die inside. Please Hershey keep your head above water. Remember your friends, know you're a part of us here now. Find hope somwhere, run if you have to but don't take the 'easy way out!'
It's just not worth it.

Sanity is NOT a matter of statistics.
The earth is round, germs cause desease, and God speaks.

I am insane of course BUT STILL!!

HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02
Posts 137
New Jersey
4 posted 2008-06-07 02:01 PM


This just came across me last night while i was laying in bed trying to fall asleep. I know the easy way out isn't always the best. Thanks guys  for your comments.

Danielle

HersheyKiss
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New Jersey
5 posted 2008-06-07 06:23 PM


don't worry not planning this anytime soon
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