What is this world coming to!?

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Teen Poetry #8

What is this world coming to!?

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-05-24 04:33 AM

this world untrustful
and painful
surronds you like a horrible dream
what is this world coming to
why does everything turn that way
why dont we smile and shine
with the long lost
glory and goodness
and the morals we are meant
to be built upon
why was it lost
in a sea of pain and crime
that no one wants to face
does it help anyone get through the day
will it make you change
for the better
or are we shaping a world where we
are selfish and want our heaven now
we can not wait
for the goodness you intended for us
whats the point of
beauty
dating
money
anything...
if we dont end up with you someday

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

1 posted 2008-05-24 04:37 AM

This is really beutifull JJ just like you, never forget that..

*-crazycece-*

lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams
Junior Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 35

2 posted 2008-06-02 09:48 PM

great write

*****dreamer*****

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

3 posted 2008-06-07 06:15 PM

thank you

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