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hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-02-11 06:01 PM

You loved me
and could never stop
you waited for me
like a time less clock

But i hid
like a child
terrified
of thunder
and the flash of your sword

But time could never make you leave
I was carved in your heart
until the end
love still stood

So I leaped
making it to your feet
you lifted me up
and pulled me tight

then softly whispered in my ear
I love you

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-02-11 06:35 PM

A heartwarming poem. (for me anyway) good work!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-02-11 11:10 PM

JJ i loved this... sooo nicely written!!!
Krysti

LittleWillow
Member

since 2007-12-27

Posts 54

3 posted 2008-02-12 05:49 PM

This is really sweet.
Love the use of words in it.
=]

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-02-12 05:55 PM

aww this is sweet...

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

5 posted 2008-02-18 12:25 PM

Thank you guys...your coments mean alot to me

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

6 posted 2008-02-18 12:48 PM

wow i loved this- like alot, the feeling was so strong i could feel it all through.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

7 posted 2008-02-18 01:07 PM

I love it. It reminds me of something...

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

8 posted 2008-02-18 04:01 PM

awww! its so sweet!!! nice poem, really cute!

ugg, sorry for all the smileys! it seems i have become rather obsessed with them lately...

-Jaki H

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

9 posted 2008-02-18 04:02 PM

lol yeah JakiH you seem to be using them more than usual.. lol

~Zach~

"Nice guys finish last"

Amic
Junior Member

since 2008-02-17

Posts 39
...I think Im lost again...

10 posted 2008-02-18 10:32 PM

Its really sweet!! Great job writing it!..

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

11 posted 2008-02-23 12:49 PM

thank you...i m glad you like it

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

12 posted 2008-04-01 01:12 AM

Jaki: no problem i love the smiles

JJ

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

13 posted 2008-04-01 05:32 PM

JJ i love this poem and i think i know who it's about so it seems to fit even better im my mind. It was very well put together. And Jaki i love using smileys to haha i just dont know how to use them on here:P

*-crazycece-*

lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams
Junior Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 35

14 posted 2008-06-07 07:42 PM

wow this just poped up on my computer some how. but i read it and i like it!

*****dreamer*****

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