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Time is Death
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Time is Death |
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minitechie Junior Member
since 2008-05-26
Posts 23california |
Falling, knowing nothing about what Im supposed to be doing, not knowing where Im supposed to be going. Who am I to answer to with me not knowing who I am supposed to be?Not knowing what my life is supposed to see is there someone here who can help me see what is in store for me? Why can’t I just be set free, why won’t he just let me be? There are times in my life where I just wanna be invisible to everyone including myself.Can you not see what death has done to me? Isn’t it obvious it has corrupted me? It has taken the lives of eight dear loved ones over a time of seven hundred thirty long days.Each day that went by grew longer and longer each time a death occurred a second ticked one half more.Time murders, hurts and destroys.Time does kill, even in the strangest of ways. It kills emotionally, mentally, and physically. It has been said that time kills the most mentally.Time tears and wears at a bond between two and never gives back what they once knew.Now that bond can never be renewed.Life is short and time is the cause.Time is the cause of most things in this world. Sadly one of those is…death.Death of loved ones, people you may not know or may not want to know.Time will always be a factor of death, its one thing you can’t do much about. No matter how much or how hard you try, no one can ever defeat death. Harlequin's Queen and Diablo's Daughter. |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
That was a good but interesting write. I found it quite difficult to read/keep up with, could probably be helpful to split it into different stanzas. I did enjoy reading it though, it was pretty deep. Belinda~* Expect nothing, Prepare for anything. |
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