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Teen Poetry #8

Carded By My Keyboard?

pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2008-05-27 08:10 PM

I'm typing a reply
And I cant help but notice
My fingers look older
As they bend,stretch,and shift
Accomodating the scrambled locations of the letters

I wonder
Are my typing fingers
A mirror which reflects my soul?
Am I perhaps older here than just fifteen?
I wonder...
Would my keyboard let me drink?

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-05-28 12:01 PM

This is really good. But i had to think on this poem.

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2008-06-02 01:11 AM

really nice poem and ike zach i had to think about it

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

3 posted 2008-06-03 09:00 AM

I too, had to think on this poem. That's part of what I liked about it though.

great write.

Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

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