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Teen Poetry #8

The eight letter lie..

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-05-27 06:13 PM

Living knowing you don't care.
Obviously trying your best to hold on.
Viciously deceaving me with your lies.
In doubt that you can go on
Not good enough for your love.
Getting back to life like before.

Mindlessly thinking about you.
Eternily wishing for this to get better.

Your eight letter lie is loving me...

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

shakalakaboomboom
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since 2008-05-19

Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A

1 posted 2008-05-27 07:56 PM

oh my gosh! this is like soo good!! ^^

~Savana

pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

2 posted 2008-05-27 08:02 PM

Honestly, I loved it!
(Although you ought to correct your spelling!) Great write!
Chloe

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-05-27 11:21 PM

Very nice!!

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

4 posted 2008-05-30 12:36 PM

ZACH... OMG Jess loves this too bits n back again... Well Done hun

minitechie
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since 2008-05-26

Posts 23
california

5 posted 2008-05-31 07:38 PM

that has happend to me b4.
this is really good

Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

6 posted 2008-05-31 11:42 PM

this is really good i liked it alot.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

7 posted 2008-06-01 12:57 PM

hey you, nice work.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

8 posted 2008-06-01 11:11 AM

Thanks guys!!

And Jess "bits n back again" LMFAO!!!!!!!! I'm glad you really liked this.. lol

"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

kissmexbaby6605
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since 2008-01-23

Posts 8
Georgia

9 posted 2008-06-02 11:32 PM

AMAZING!

Belinda
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since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

10 posted 2008-06-03 08:26 AM

very impressive.
short but very sweet.

Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

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