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Falling rain
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0 posted 2008-05-27 06:13 PM


Living knowing you don't care.
Obviously trying your best to hold on.
Viciously deceaving me with your lies.
In doubt that you can go on
Not good enough for your love.
Getting back to life like before.

Mindlessly thinking about you.
Eternily wishing for this to get better.

Your eight letter lie is loving me...

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

© Copyright 2008 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
shakalakaboomboom
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1 posted 2008-05-27 07:56 PM


oh my gosh! this is like soo good!! ^^

                                   ~Savana

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2 posted 2008-05-27 08:02 PM


Honestly, I loved it!
(Although you ought to correct your spelling!) Great write!
     Chloe

Earl Robertson
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3 posted 2008-05-27 11:21 PM


Very nice!!

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

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4 posted 2008-05-30 12:36 PM


ZACH... OMG Jess loves this too bits n back again... Well Done hun
minitechie
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5 posted 2008-05-31 07:38 PM


that has happend to me b4.
this is really good

Clockwork_Orange
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6 posted 2008-05-31 11:42 PM


this is really good i liked it alot.
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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7 posted 2008-06-01 12:57 PM


hey you, nice work.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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8 posted 2008-06-01 11:11 AM


Thanks guys!!

And Jess "bits n back again" LMFAO!!!!!!!!  I'm glad you really liked this.. lol


"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

kissmexbaby6605
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9 posted 2008-06-02 11:32 PM


AMAZING!

Belinda
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10 posted 2008-06-03 08:26 AM


very impressive.
short but very sweet.

Belinda~*

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