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Belinda
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since 2006-01-30
Posts 126
UK

0 posted 2008-06-02 06:35 PM




how dare you try to take your life,
you neglectful, selfish witch.
do you forget about your young children,
life isn't all about being rich.

so what if you are losing money,
you live in a conuntry full of hope.
i see no reason for you to cry,
yet you sit around and mope.

there are kids in other countries,
the same age as your own,
they will grow up without parents,
have to survive all alone.

but you will choose to leave your children,
of course they have no say.
can't be bothered to clean up your mess,
so you'll leave the easy way.

so go ahead and take those pills,
but no sympanthy will you get from me,
when my sisters ask what our mother was like,
i'll save them the box so they can see.

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

© Copyright 2008 Belinda Black - All Rights Reserved
Belinda
Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126
UK
1 posted 2008-06-02 06:43 PM


a couple of spelling mistakes guys, sorry. was on of those writes where it just comes out and you don't realise until you go back and read it haha.

anyway, enjoy
hope we are all very well.
Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
2 posted 2008-06-02 08:57 PM


Fantastical write...is that a word? i don't think that's a word. Well whatever, great write.

           {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Earl Robertson
Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
3 posted 2008-06-02 09:15 PM


Very well written.
Best of luck with your mom.

"And the sky...the sky became...PINK!!!" (Seusical the Musical)

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
4 posted 2008-06-03 04:04 AM


Belle you gorgeous thing... ya made me cry... mind you thats not so easy to do these days.. I'm hear if u need to talk hun.. just send me n email or something...

Hugs and Luv,
Jess

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