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The Witch and the Atheist (my duet with the ingenious Earl Robertson)
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The Witch and the Atheist (my duet with the ingenious Earl Robertson) |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
The Witch and the Atheist Smoke curls from a hut in the woods Open for all to see For a ways a way in a quiet town Lives, also, unbelief For God, he made the world Sent spirits before darkest hell But when these two he sent, Missions to fulfill On him their backs they turned Spirits of dark light found Wandering in a wilderness Devoid of Heaven's sound So here we are in heaven In love and thus in hell Hoping two to save And hated evil to dispel How can I argue with such bright eyes? The greyest which, the greatest disguise And, try as I might, the villains tongue Has me now- I'm almost won What is white and what is black Will witches spell send me back? But nay, nor unbelievers feat Could send our souls into retreat I run t'wards this hopeless aim Hoping to win yet hoping to lose And I find that I have nothing left To give besides this awful news So here I am reaching for a hand Witch will clasp and do I care? But the cold, cold hand of disbelief Is even pulled from my despair Where is the friend I long for? Whose fond words draw but light I'm walking in a wilderness And found naught but night The truth spins round in circles But God speaks from above He issues us comfort In all forms of love "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
This was EPIC!! Exelent work (and less mistakes on my part) if I do say so myself! Thanks Kate! "We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida |
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eternally_singing Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123PA, United States |
Spectacular poem! Good job, you two! At night a candle's brighter than the sun |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
good job!! JJ |
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lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams Junior Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 35 |
good job guys i like the idea of duets! *****dreamer***** |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
On behalf of both Frank and myself I thank you all for your kindess and for reading. -Kate "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
LOL and now I have no need to post. "We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Wow too many big words and ye old' english for my brain to understand lol.. i think i need a dictonary lol. This is really good.. although my brain wasn't able to understand half the words and frazes you used lol. Great teamwork!!! ~Zach~ |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
Earl Robertson is quite right; this was indeed epic. AMAZING work you two, you should collaborate more often; although on your own, the awe is still contained. Amazing. Chloe |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
wow!! I can't believe we wrote this, we're so intune that I can't now tell which parts i wrote and which ones you wrote. Creepy. (in a good way) -Kate "What are you!?" |
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