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Teen Poetry #8

My Innocence

HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-08-15 01:07 PM

My Innocence

Make me feel better
Make me feel alright
Please say you're sorry
Give me back my life

You took away my innocence
Left me there to cry
Wanting to wash away
Into the deep blue sky

Running running
I can't stop yet
I'm gasping for air
And theres no place to set

Endless emotion
Let them find a way
To get lost in the night
And never return to day

I collaspe I can't breathe
Just make me feel alright
Give me back my innocence
Because I'm too tired to fight

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

1 posted 2008-08-15 07:57 PM

This is really amazing. One of you're best ones yet. Hope your doing okay.

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-08-16 03:02 AM

Awe Hun, I know you can do this, just hang in there and keep breathing. I'm always here for you if you need me. :sqeeze:

{~~*~~} Great poem

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

Sara Mikael
Junior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 34

3 posted 2008-09-14 04:17 PM

WHAT A GREAT POEM

THE PAIN OF LOVE

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

4 posted 2008-09-14 04:32 PM

this was a wonderful poem

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

5 posted 2008-09-15 01:13 PM

Let us help you fight, That was what the last line made me think, such a wonderful poem, such emotion.

Becca

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

Sara Mikael
Junior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 34

6 posted 2010-07-07 11:14 AM

WOOWW...I'm amazed........good work

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