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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

0 posted 2008-05-23 05:25 PM

Not my best ever but hey.

Four Robots Stood Laughing

I saw a sorry sight today
I looked and I saw
Didn’t know what to say

Four robots stood laughing
In a circle
On this early morn’

I understood their tenses
And the joke
At which they laughed

But it t’was an eerie sound
That mechanical
Automated bark

I’m Not sure if the
Other kids saw
Our metal skins right then

But I saw a sorry sight today
Four robots stood laughing
And I knew not what to say

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2008-05-24 08:50 AM

oh i understand. it was interesting frank. love ya.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-05-24 10:23 AM

Honestly I didn't understand this that much.. but it sounds like a good poem

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

Unfortunate Disaster
Junior Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 17
Australia

3 posted 2008-05-24 11:52 AM

i really liked it. i don't know why. but i really truly honestly loved it!!!!

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-05-24 08:54 PM

Lol Thanks guys!

Kate: what did you get? It might be different.

Zach, UD: Listen to your friends banter tomarrow, listen to the way you somtimes laugh and see if it's not automated somtimes.

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

5 posted 2008-05-24 11:20 PM

i get this and i really like it

JJ

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

6 posted 2008-05-25 04:43 PM

That we are so caught up in being similar that that's what we've become, human metal. Unbeanding, unwilling to do anything but the required.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

7 posted 2008-05-25 07:15 PM

Thanks Guys!

Kate: Ahh and that to is true. Acctualy more to the point than my own thoughts.

Thanks

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

8 posted 2008-05-31 11:43 PM

ha, the title made me laugh and it was really good actually. good job.

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

9 posted 2008-06-01 10:51 AM

Ohhhhhhhhhhh I get it!!

I had to read the poem over and what you said..

then I had to connect the dots lol

It makes perfect sence now!! gawd I do have my retarded moments.. lol

"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

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