Teen Poetry #8 |
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My Every Little Love Song |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
My Every Little Love Song Oh Enchantress! Dark beauty dear Oh what care free laughter Light clouded eyes Let me love my hate my fear Whisper secrets in my ear Oh Philosopher! My poor wayfaring friend To the drunkard lend a hand Speak the deepest thoughts Let me love in wisdoms might Bright thoughts nights divine Oh Dear One! My safe-guard from the fall Oh what fond words echo A page which warms the night Let me love my Lord my God Show me my true fright HA! Here I am With my words Their meaning like a sieve Three thin wires With my every little Love song in between "We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida |
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eternally_singing Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123PA, United States |
well done- I really like the style you used. |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
This is really amazing. I particularly noticed the recurring use of the phrase 'let me love'. I'm a mite confused as to your meaning, though I loved it all the same. |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Thanks guys! "We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
WOW.. I'm almost speechless... Amazing write.. |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
nice write JJ |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
NO nononononononono! I could have sworn I wrote a reply to this b/c I'm pretty much in love with it!!!!!!!!! It's my all time favorite and we must discuse via email. Love you, -Kate "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
i forgot . . .. to ummm . . .add to my library. . . . -Kate "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Thanks ALOT guys! Kate: ROFL one email coming right up! "We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida |
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Falling rain![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Amazing.. Truely amazing.. ~Zach~ |
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