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Earl Robertson
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0 posted 2008-05-26 07:48 PM


My Every Little Love Song

Oh Enchantress!
Dark beauty dear
Oh what care free laughter
Light clouded eyes
Let me love my hate my fear
Whisper secrets in my ear

Oh Philosopher!
My poor wayfaring friend
To the drunkard lend a hand
Speak the deepest thoughts
Let me love in wisdoms might
Bright thoughts nights divine

Oh Dear One!
My safe-guard from the fall
Oh what fond words echo
A page which warms the night
Let me love my Lord my God
Show me my true fright

HA!

Here I am
With my words
Their meaning like a sieve
Three thin wires
With my every little
Love song in between

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

© Copyright 2008 Frank Robertson - All Rights Reserved
eternally_singing
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1 posted 2008-05-26 11:54 PM


well done- I really like the style you used.


pen&paper
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2 posted 2008-05-27 08:06 PM


This is really amazing. I particularly noticed the recurring use of the phrase 'let me love'. I'm a mite confused as to your meaning, though I loved it all the same.
Earl Robertson
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3 posted 2008-05-29 06:33 PM


Thanks guys!

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

RevengeIsMine
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4 posted 2008-05-30 12:37 PM


WOW.. I'm almost speechless... Amazing write..
hiddensmiles
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5 posted 2008-05-30 08:11 PM


nice write

JJ

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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6 posted 2008-05-30 08:54 PM


NO nononononononono! I could have sworn I wrote a reply to this b/c I'm pretty much in love with it!!!!!!!!! It's my all time favorite and we must discuse via email.

Love you,

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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7 posted 2008-05-30 09:00 PM


i forgot  . . .. to ummm . . .add to my library. . . .

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Earl Robertson
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8 posted 2008-05-30 09:59 PM


Thanks ALOT guys!

Kate: ROFL one email coming right up!

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

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9 posted 2008-05-31 12:23 PM


Amazing.. Truely amazing..

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

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