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Teen Poetry #8

Betrayed

RedNail
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden

0 posted 2008-05-14 05:25 PM

You betrayed my trust
once again

You don't understand what I feel

And my black tears fall
to never hit
the ground

Ask yourself
Why should I trust
Someone like you

And this time I know
I'm mistaken for handing you
a heart worth
breaking
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I've had a writers block for a long time now and I'm a bit rusty.

Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride.

Bahigano
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 31
Nebraska

1 posted 2008-05-15 02:37 PM

i think that your poem was Great the reason for that is it really hits home for this small town girl my heart has be probbed and prodded at and well hurt a lot and i really don't like it. thanks for sharing.
love
lea

minitechie
Junior Member

since 2008-05-26

Posts 23
california

2 posted 2008-05-31 07:35 PM

this is really good
i wrote a simalar one to this.

mine is called Blood of the Betrayed.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-06-01 11:13 AM

This is really good and I'm glad you am back to writing again.. writers bloke is a pain.. lol

"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

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