Rose Petal glasses.. lets see your real beauty

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Teen Poetry #8

Rose Petal glasses.. lets see your real beauty

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-05-11 12:17 PM

Under your spell..

You made me believe the lies you held under.

You took away my soul and mind to used it to your own advantege.

How can you be so cruel?

But even in my anger I'm under your spell.

Like rose petal glasses, I only see your beauty.

Your siren voice sings a song..
a song of sweet,loving death

My breathe is leaking but I still feel good enough for you.

You torture me so sweetly but i can't let this go..

Can't wake from this dream.

Because i couldn't say no to you.

You made me feel good for once in my life.

Your velvet kiss of death kills me softly.

How can I say no to you..

Your claimed your prize..
My heart

But let it drop to the ground.

Let it drown in its sorrow..

You don't care at all..

But i still feel good enough for your love.

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-05-11 01:31 PM

.....i bet i know which song you were listening to!! Great poem, there's lots of emotion.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2008-05-11 03:21 PM

lots of feeling here, great poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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