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Tripp'ncutie
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since 2008-05-05
Posts 73
minnasota

0 posted 2008-05-09 09:34 AM


no longer strong enough
to play your games
like an old guitar
my strings ready to break
the phone no longer rings
when it does
your voice no longer excpected
confused
i still some how love you
hostile never
anger not in the least
Pure pain,
i promise i am not ok
lying with a tear soaked teddy
i guess this is good bye
you'll remember me
with my broken wings
i will fly
For now i'll see you someday
Someday, some how,
I'll think of you
Your picture in my album
another box in the closet
Poor angel
at the foot of the bed
Don't Cry tonight
Though the world has taken
The last of me
Now naked they see
A bleeding heart
A lost soul
An already broken girl
The empty shell of what used to be
Silently
Screaming save me

[This message has been edited by Tripp'ncutie (05-10-2008 04:46 PM).]

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since 2008-01-31
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1 posted 2008-05-09 02:20 PM


Wow.. simply amazing and trageicly sad.. i shead a tear for you.. hope things get better for ya.

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
2 posted 2008-05-09 02:35 PM


I'm sorry. I don't know what to say. This is going to my library.

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

pipgurl_95
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since 2008-05-11
Posts 8
Michigan
3 posted 2008-05-11 05:43 PM


beautiful poem...
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