The Dark Pain of a Fallen Angel (a duet with the bestest poet ever...RevengeIsMine)

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Teen Poetry #8

The Dark Pain of a Fallen Angel (a duet with the bestest poet ever...RevengeIsMine)

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-05-03 02:25 PM

{So this is our duet, it took us a while but I think we did okay. lol, We hope u like it!}

This blue angel of light lingers through the black clouds below
Humming to herself a dark toon of sorrow
No light has found her, she's all alone
Will you be the one too carry her home

Her wings are weak, her smile reversed
Her whole body's shaking, she's been cursed
Her bones are weak and her body bruised
You can tell from the inside that she'd once been abused

She doesn't sleep, she can't eat.
Something horrible has brought her to defeat.
No more smiles that light up the sky,
All of them have been replaced with her cries

She's cold and she's crying, she can't stand to breathe
These emotionless tears have brought her to her Knees
She’s Just a fallen angel who has no grace
She’s known only by the tears that fall from her face

Two years have come and gone, and her body’s laid to rest
It’s been a long journey but this ending’s for the best
The violin can be heard in the dark skies of regret
It represents the many dreams that the angel can’t forget

So if you listen quietly, place your hand upon your heart
You’ll know this little angel has been there from the start
She’s the angel of darkness, and she has a message for you tonight
Everything involves pain, but to win you have to fight

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

crimsonXnails
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since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

1 posted 2008-05-03 05:01 PM

hey hey,
that was sooooo good!! you guys r amazing. luv ya,
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

2 posted 2008-05-03 11:26 PM

speechless........AMAZING!!!!

earn your freedom of the charge of sacrificing your life for others

imsimplyme
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since 2008-04-01

Posts 16
California

3 posted 2008-05-04 01:00 AM

wow thats was really awesome, it was put together so well.

great poem

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-05-04 12:25 PM

Emily, Jess. you guys did Amazing!! Love this poem!! Great Work!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2008-05-04 06:06 PM

Thanks guys!!

Hey Jess.............I think they like it!...

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

6 posted 2008-05-10 02:07 PM

Em, I think it's totally great. You both have done an awesome job!

*Julianna*

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

7 posted 2008-05-10 02:13 PM

Thank you Julianna, but u may want to go online and see the message I left you...

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

8 posted 2008-05-11 03:57 AM

Wow Jess and Em... yooh really pulled this off... I love it!!!
Krysti

Unfortunate Disaster
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since 2008-05-08

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Australia

9 posted 2008-05-11 07:07 AM

i totally loved it!!! it was so fantastic!!! your guys are amazing!!!!!!!

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