The Hymns Of A Broken Hallelujah ( For All Those Ppl Who Think They Hav It Tough)

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The Hymns Of A Broken Hallelujah ( For All Those Ppl Who Think They Hav It Tough)

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2008-05-10 04:24 AM

For all those people out there tonight who are sitting on their backsides whining and complaining about how hard their life is I'd like you to take moment to reflect on the lives of this young couple who one there wedding night were torn apart but destruction. In a small town in Tasmania an accident occurred, it appears that a teenage boy was driving under the influence of alcohol when he lost control of his car and crashed into the car of a newly wed couple. The two were on their way to a hotel room where they were to spend there first night together as a couple. The girl was 22 and pregnant with their first child. I did n't know the couple personally by my dad went to school with the guys brother. So tonight if your reading this please take a momment to reflect on lives that have been torn apart by a teenage boy travelling too fast under the influance of alchol.

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The Hymn's Of A Broken Hallelujah.

I heard the news on the radio today
A life was lost, just taken away
A man stood alone on the edge life,
The night he lost his gorgeous wife

The mingled car lay on the road
She was bleeding and he was cold
His faith was strong but he need proof
And there he found her, hanging from the roof

The smell of blood lingered in the air
As she opened her mouth to scream in despair
he pulled her body into his embrace
he held her up and wiped her face

The secret cord was played tonight
Under the bitter distant moonlight
A lover lost, and an angel received
A distant memory of those gods’s deceived.
he carried her body to the open road
Fell to the ground as the car explode
Tears were rolling down his cheek
His body trembled, she was weak

The broken sounds of hallelujah played in the air
As bright red blood trickled from her hair
The hymns of a non believer where finally made right
For an angel carried her home tonight

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

1 posted 2008-05-10 09:24 AM

wow.....All of my best wishes go out to their families. this is a beautiful poem

jess i need to talk to you...ur the only one i can talk to this about......i did something horrbile
much love,
keagan

earn your freedom of the charge of sacrificing your life for others

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-05-10 11:00 AM

This is just plain tragic.. my heart ache just to think of the act..

I hope things get better for the lost couple...

Best wishes for ya' Jess..

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

3 posted 2008-05-10 12:16 PM

that is so sad, but nicely written

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2008-05-10 01:33 PM

This is really beautiful Jess. It almost had me crying, beautiful wirte.

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{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

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