Teen Poetry #8 |
Unseen Destruction |
XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I used to be able to laugh. I used to be able to cry. Why is it that now, I just sit here and watch life pass by? I didn't do anything right, I can't find something I did wrong. Why has my life turned on me? Why am I singing this sad song? With so many questions, to much confusion, I don't try to think and I don't try to hide. I'll sit behind my glass wall, I wont attempt to leave your side. I will protect you in our world of loneliness. I wont let you fall into the arms of the real world, The arms of the ones who led us to the center of destruction. {~~*~~} {&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}} |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Wow sounds like my life story, Great work! ~Zach~ |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Agree with Zach this poem is like tottally awesome.. and it reminds me so much of my own life. |
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wisdomofthesword Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224the last place on earth |
great poem I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so |
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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
Great poem. TJ So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful... |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
WOW. amazen poem Em. Krysti |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Amazing! I know exactly what you're talking about, as does everyone else apparently. Horrible isn't it that all of us are there (or have been there) but none of us open up enough to have or be given a measure of empathy. Not one of us. "We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I fully agree with you Earl. Its pretty sad isn't it? ~Zach~ |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Yes it is sad. But maybe we're all just to scared to take a chance at trusting some one. But thanks for reading. {~~*~~} {&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}} |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
I ask again Why? "We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Well to answer ur question Earl, it could be from past childhood experiences. Some are just to scared to open up becuse they don't think that someone will believe them, or that they'll take a different side. And some people just don't like the jugement that they get from others. Its just a way that people react I guess. I hope that answers everyone's questions, probably not but hey..I try. lol {~~*~~} {&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}} |
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BookOfMoon New Member
since 2008-04-25
Posts 3 |
keeping one you love safe within your arms, we should all try to do that more often |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
I think it says alot. Many perople read between the lines to find the truer meaning, I really like it. Great job once again! |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
great poem JJ |
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