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Teen Poetry #8

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wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

0 posted 2008-05-10 01:33 AM

well its not the best kind of a bang together I just wrote now, but here it is anyway

they say home is where the heart is
but to my heart i cant be true
from this land i must depart
its time that I shoot though
I don't know where I'm going
I cant remember where I'v been
although the rivers flowing
she flows right under me
as I steer into the darkness
only now that I can see
my wondering life is empty
is there a life for me
my heart has shattered into pieces
not from love does my heart long or ache
it's a sad and empty feeling
having no where to call home

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-05-10 12:08 PM

nice write!

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2008-05-11 02:20 AM

thanks jj

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

3 posted 2008-05-20 09:01 PM

great write!

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

4 posted 2008-05-22 10:50 AM

great job i liked it great write

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