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Earl Robertson
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0 posted 2008-04-29 01:50 PM



Well when RevengeIsMine and FallingRain did their duet it got me thinking: I want to do a Duet. So I talked to Kate and after a few weeks and minimal editing here it is!!

And Loving Fear

Each winter's time I find that I
Am caught in moods so odd
This warm and cold and freezing pain
Could only come from God

It seems that all these let downs
Have almost turned around
This maze we walk each every day
Has taught me love unbound

The storms in distance almost fear
The light I have in hand to guide
But the fear of them I have within
The desire now to hide

And what of things of other worlds
When all we have right here
Is white and black, grey and grey
Clouded faith and loving fear


"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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1 posted 2008-04-29 07:21 PM


Love the intro Frank. lol, we should do another. this time you start. lol.

-Manda

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hiddensmiles
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2 posted 2008-04-29 07:29 PM


good job you guys!!! i like this!!

JJ

Earl Robertson
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3 posted 2008-04-29 07:30 PM


Thank you!

And Kate I have one word for you...


Yaaaaayyyy!!!!

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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4 posted 2008-04-29 08:12 PM


frank, frankly (hehe) you rock!

I live in a Bella world. only everyone is blindingly human . . .

Falling rain
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5 posted 2008-04-29 08:56 PM


Wow!!! Not bad Earl and Kate. I love doing duets. This one was pretty good. =]. Althought the topic for me was sort of fague. Can you please explain? Either one of you lol. But Great job guys!!

~Zach~



Earl Robertson
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6 posted 2008-04-30 10:47 PM


Thanks Zach!
Hmmm this is not a topic that can be summed up in a one word blurb. Sufice it to say that Kate could be my twin for the emotions, beliefs and lives we share.
As such the topic of this poem for me is both vague and very specific, as I read it story's from my life, and hers flash through my mind.

More even than that I feel the emotions that have permiated our lives over the past few months. Love and fear, spirit and confusion, it's all there and every one is a topic to itself.

(in english the topic is vague.)

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

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7 posted 2008-05-01 12:45 PM


Ohh that explains alot! And thats cool vauge topic are fun to read lol. once again great job on the poem!

~Zach~



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8 posted 2008-05-06 02:47 PM


Hey Frank- nice job ofsumming up, i wrote like three replies to it myself, but none of them seemed worthy enough for thy ears Zach, lol. Well he got it. Thanks Frank, I owe you more than you could imagine for my sanity.

-A Loving Kate

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9 posted 2008-05-11 02:18 AM


YAY!! I was counting down the days for you and Kate to do a duet.. i knew it would happen.. i was looking forward to it soo much!!! glad you finally read my mind great poem i love it!!
Krysti

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10 posted 2008-05-18 04:22 PM


just wait krysti, we've got another one coming soon . . .!

-KAte

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11 posted 2008-05-22 02:16 AM


dammmm thats great
nowe i am excited
Krysti

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