Teen Poetry #8 |
And Loving Fear (my duet with the illustrious RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed) |
Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Well when RevengeIsMine and FallingRain did their duet it got me thinking: I want to do a Duet. So I talked to Kate and after a few weeks and minimal editing here it is!! And Loving Fear Each winter's time I find that I Am caught in moods so odd This warm and cold and freezing pain Could only come from God It seems that all these let downs Have almost turned around This maze we walk each every day Has taught me love unbound The storms in distance almost fear The light I have in hand to guide But the fear of them I have within The desire now to hide And what of things of other worlds When all we have right here Is white and black, grey and grey Clouded faith and loving fear "We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Love the intro Frank. lol, we should do another. this time you start. lol. -Manda I live in a Bella world. only everyone is blindingly human . . . |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
good job you guys!!! i like this!! JJ |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Thank you! And Kate I have one word for you... Yaaaaayyyy!!!! "We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
frank, frankly (hehe) you rock! I live in a Bella world. only everyone is blindingly human . . . |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Wow!!! Not bad Earl and Kate. I love doing duets. This one was pretty good. =]. Althought the topic for me was sort of fague. Can you please explain? Either one of you lol. But Great job guys!! ~Zach~ |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Thanks Zach! Hmmm this is not a topic that can be summed up in a one word blurb. Sufice it to say that Kate could be my twin for the emotions, beliefs and lives we share. As such the topic of this poem for me is both vague and very specific, as I read it story's from my life, and hers flash through my mind. More even than that I feel the emotions that have permiated our lives over the past few months. Love and fear, spirit and confusion, it's all there and every one is a topic to itself. (in english the topic is vague.) "We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Ohh that explains alot! And thats cool vauge topic are fun to read lol. once again great job on the poem! ~Zach~ |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Hey Frank- nice job ofsumming up, i wrote like three replies to it myself, but none of them seemed worthy enough for thy ears Zach, lol. Well he got it. Thanks Frank, I owe you more than you could imagine for my sanity. -A Loving Kate I live in a Bella world. only everyone is blindingly human . . . |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
YAY!! I was counting down the days for you and Kate to do a duet.. i knew it would happen.. i was looking forward to it soo much!!! glad you finally read my mind great poem i love it!! Krysti |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
just wait krysti, we've got another one coming soon . . .! -KAte I live in a Bella world. only everyone is blindingly human . . . |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
dammmm thats great nowe i am excited Krysti |
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