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Teen Poetry #8

All I See Is Magic When I Look At You

Unfortunate Disaster
Junior Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 17
Australia

0 posted 2008-05-09 11:25 AM

Magic.
Flawless Magic.
I Look Into Your Eyes, I See The Stars.

Magic.
Sacred Magic.
My Heart I Give To You This Night, Has Scars.

Magic.
Simple Magic.
To Feel Things That No Human Eye Can See.

Magic.
Endless Magic.
Forever And A Day, Together You And Me.

Romantic
Junior Member

since 2007-12-10

Posts 28
Lost in the eyes of the one i love

1 posted 2008-05-09 11:27 AM

I love this poem... And i dont really think i have to say any more

Love... it is the best feeling in the world... but beware.. the path to happyness can hurt alot

Unfortunate Disaster
Junior Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 17
Australia

2 posted 2008-05-09 11:31 AM

So you should i wrote it for you. xxxx

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-05-09 01:07 PM

I like it.

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

krad008
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 82

4 posted 2008-05-09 03:39 PM

wow that was beautiful well written

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-05-09 03:42 PM

I agree! Beautiful and what else can i say.. hmmm....... magical!! lol

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

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