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spiderilia
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since 2008-04-24
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0 posted 2008-05-07 04:07 AM


Night

night has fallen
its so silent
time of darkness
and of fear...

night has fallen
I hear nothing
but your breathing
you lay near

night has fallen
sending my hand
in this darkness
reaching you

I feel chill
inside my body
breaking outside
breaking through

night has fallen
look in your eyes
see desire
its so clear

night has fallen
kissing softly
can't believe it
you are here

night has fallen
look around us
dying candles
glass of wine

night has fallen
laying with you
can't believe it
you are mine...

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1 posted 2008-05-09 03:44 PM


Awwe nice one dude! Very beautiful. Great work!!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

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