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justanotherstorm
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0 posted 2008-05-07 10:44 PM



The sweet smell of apple pie
I see the glisten in your eye
I know you want it more than me
Cuz I'm just a banana on this tree
How I would love for you to pick me out
I try hard to scream and shout
But it seems you pay no attention to me
So I'll just watch you eat it happily
As I hang from this banana tree
...
I hope you don't choke this time
For I would make an awful crime
I would laugh and make a joke
But it's not that funny cuz you got an apple pie
Down your throat

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yea i think this is funny but i dont think you guys will...well yea i kind of made it for this one person that i know....lol...well yea...ummm hope u enjoyed...

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rebelangelv
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1 posted 2008-05-08 12:42 PM


hahahhhahahhahahaha omg i loved this dude!!!!!lolololooll

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
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2 posted 2008-05-08 01:16 AM


lol at least i know someone likes it lol
wisdomofthesword
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3 posted 2008-05-09 02:09 AM


interesting poem... makes me want pie

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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4 posted 2008-05-09 03:35 AM


Wow love it!!! and yes it makes me want pie too... but i already ate pie today.. oh well im due for another piece n e waiz
Krysti

wisdomofthesword
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5 posted 2008-05-09 05:29 AM


yea i already had pie today to but just cant get enough of that steak cheese and pastry

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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6 posted 2008-05-09 02:51 PM


hmmm pie. lol i want a peice now. lol great poem

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

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