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Teen Poetry #8
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spiderilia
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since 2008-04-24
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Israel

0 posted 2008-05-09 04:05 AM



this sad day when I broke
was so sad, that God cry
and his tears, cold and sad
fell with some tears of mine

on this day my wings broke
so no more can I fly
crying down on my knees
with my hands to the sky

cause of you my heart broke
I will never be whole
there is emptiness now
in the dark of my soul

I have opened my myself
you can break all you see
cause I'm living without you
without you I'm not me

God, I've asked not for much
for one girl I cant get
help her see who I am
or please, help me forget....

if yo have ay ideas for a title fell free to share...
hope this one wont bring anyone down...

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