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Selfish Pleasure |
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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
She hears footsteps running behind her, The sound continuously echoing in her ears She knows he’s coming, She knows he’s coming to get her Her heart is drumming, Violently threatening to burst from her very chest She stops; frozen in place Unable to move in fear he might catch her Her hand travels down to her stomach And comes back with a sticky wetness How did this get there? Why am I pouring out my own blood? Questions swirl through her mind As her thoughts jumble into a grey abyss She hears another sound once again Turning her head around, She gets a glimpse of his face A wicked smile upon him, He comes out of the shadows holding a gun Her mind screaming for her to run away, Her feet seem unable to process that request He pulls out his gun as her feet start to move She can see it in the way he looks at her, He’ll do anything and everything to catch her To feel her body wrestling against his tight hold To feel her waist struggle under his grip, For his own selfish pleasure Death in the air, wisps of life in her heart, She’s trapped in his own little plot Hands firmly grab her waist, As she sees that smile once again He’s ready for revenge and he won’t stop until he gets it She’s ready for it all to end and as he pulls her to his chest, She knows that it’s only a matter of time... Before it all comes to an end So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful... |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Uhmm wow. this is really... uhmm.. well.. different... bloody love is the closest way for me to discribe it with out my comment being taken off. lol. Its pretty good for this type of topic lol ~Zach~ |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
well what i got out of this i am hopeing is not true...need to talk to you about this.but yes well written JJ [This message has been edited by hiddensmiles (04-28-2008 11:23 PM).] |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
This scared me. I don't know what you meant to put into this poem but I'm quite frankly scared for you. This was well written in any case. "We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Woah, at first I was a little confused but now i get what ur talking about. I already knew it was scary, but this poem just descibes it more. I don't know how u put up with it, I still think u should tell who i told u to tell. But i guess u have ur reasons. Great poem..library. {~~*~~} {&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}} |
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eternally_singing Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123PA, United States |
Tremendously well done. Though I do have to own that it is scary as befitting such a difficult topic. Amazing well written At night a candle's brighter than the sun |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
wow that was an adventurous yet frightening poem i hope everything is well with you or gets better i dont know what its fully about but yea good poem tho... |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Ya know its been a while... but wow touching |
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Tripp'ncutie Member
since 2008-05-05
Posts 73minnasota |
dear lord! that was just amazing, really wow caught my attention. |
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wisdomofthesword Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224the last place on earth |
great, powerful, emotional poem and a little worrying hope every things alright I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so |
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