The Suns Burning In Your Eyes

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Teen Poetry #8

The Suns Burning In Your Eyes

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-05-06 08:15 PM

the suns burning out
in your eyes i can see
your words make no sense
your bleeding to bleed
the bottles half gone
and you cant even read
this half hearted attempt
at a goodbye story
i wrote it for you
with the pain in my chest
wishing and aching
to clean up this mess

the suns burning out
in your eyes i can see
your words make no sense
so stop and breath

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

1 posted 2008-05-06 08:33 PM

WOW emotion major. liked it. great work!!

~hugs~ idk i just b-ing silly

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2008-05-06 08:54 PM

talent never dies

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

3 posted 2008-05-08 07:02 AM

thanks guys. it means alot.

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-05-09 01:08 PM

I am in awe!! This is amazing Orange!!! LIBRARY!!

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

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