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Teen Poetry #8

What's on your mind, Tell the truth

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-05-06 10:54 PM

Fallen tears stain my
face, I thought of all
those times we spent
laughing, all the times
that we were happy.
What happened to us?
Why can't I look at you
without holding back my
tears? Why do I love you
so much? Why don't you let
me in, or tell me what you
feel? I just want to hold
you, hug you. Let you
understand how much
you mean to me.
My life,
My world,
I couldn't live without you.
Not even if you died loving
me. Not even if you told me
you were sorry. I can't
stand being here without you,
I would die if I didn't have
you.
What's the first thing on your
mind? Why am I the only one who
seems to notice your fake smiles,
or your attempts to pretend.
What are you thinking? Tell
me why all your smiles are shattered.
Your my one true friend, please
let me understad.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

1 posted 2008-05-06 11:06 PM

Awww, thanx Em. I know that I may have been a little on the off side lately but I'll tell you what's up soon. I love this poem though, it's really incredible. Love ya hun.

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-05-07 04:34 PM

Nice emily. I hope things between you and Tori work out.. This is a really good poem. I can understand where your coming from

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

3 posted 2008-05-09 09:41 AM

wow i know that feeling all to well

nice write.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

4 posted 2008-05-10 11:14 AM

It's great emily, to let your feelings out. I know how you feel.

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

5 posted 2008-05-10 12:19 PM

great write

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