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Teen Poetry #8

calling all angels

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

0 posted 2008-05-06 06:53 PM

heart of hearts
a hand to hold
someone to listen
i need someone
calling all angels
come save a dying heart
broken and beaten
on the floor
just hold me
dont let go
calling all angels
im falling fast
bleeding from my past
cracked and broken
i lay in a corner
my bed soaked with tears
from the night before
calling all angels
i cant cry any more
my eyes dry
my body aches
no sleep tonight
calling all angels
please rescue me
i'll be by the window
sitting waiting
in the moon light
calling all angels
come be my angel tonight

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-05-06 06:54 PM

Nice write!!

krad008
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 82

2 posted 2008-05-06 10:00 PM

wow that was deep

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-05-07 02:03 PM

wow nice poem! i really like it. keep up the great writing

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

4 posted 2008-05-09 02:13 AM

I gotta add a 3rd wow in here, this was really touching

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

5 posted 2008-05-09 08:30 AM

thanks every one! i really appriciate it!

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