your flowers will never fade

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Teen Poetry #8

your flowers will never fade

BookOfMoon
New Member

since 2008-04-25

Posts 3

0 posted 2008-05-05 12:13 PM

Pass it on to me when the sun shines the bottom of the sea
and your roses will grow again.
The dark and dusty sea eats light and sunshine and hope sometimes
When it happens cant you see
there's no point to turn to me
because i'm the first to drown.
Youre salty tears are acid to my eyes
I'll chase them away
My tears are floods the size of oceans that wash away all
you can see,
of me.
But your flowers need to grow, so i'll rise again,
to give them light.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-05-06 05:56 PM

This is really good, and I can deffinetly understand what your talking about. Great job, Welcome to PIP. (I think this may go in my library...)

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{~Emily~}

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-05-11 02:27 AM

wow very deep poem

great write
Welsome to Passions

Krysti

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