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Teen Poetry #8

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Loruh
New Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 5

0 posted 2008-05-05 08:27 PM

it is an attempt in vain: i have learned to perfect the pain.
anger sparks from the mouth in a sickly red hue,
but deeper in the blood runs blue.
i watch the black movement with envious eyes of lime,
the tragic teenagers of the time.
i run away to the shade in which all colors fade
for those content, the rainbow above acts as an alcove.
i am in no way worth the stay
for the duplicity in this treacherous city
so the shadows take me silent
and the boiling blood turns violent.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-05-06 05:51 PM

Interesting, I'm not sure I understand but that doesnt mean it wasn't good. Great first post, and welcome to PIP.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-05-11 02:25 AM

Welcome to Passions Loruh

great 1st post hope to reed more

ps. love the way you spell youer name
Krysti

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