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Teen Poetry #8

secrets,lies, and then there was you

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

0 posted 2008-05-05 03:13 PM

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The picture on the wall speaks
tears threatening a life
The thin plate glass window holding
a raging river

An angel's broken wings
night's shadow
cast upon a tear stained cheek
a memory of tomorrow
that may never be
a faded picture
not taken
sits on the wall

Gasping for air
not yet drowning
i can't breathe

you used to be my drug
a best friend
still the one i run to
a storm i wanted to stay in

waiting in,
shadows of light
breaking my wings
frozen in flight

your voice lingers
after the dial tone

[This message has been edited by Tripp'ncutie (05-06-2008 08:44 AM).]

krad008
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 82

1 posted 2008-05-05 05:03 PM

jeeez this is a complex poem. I think I get the jist of it but ca n you explain the beginning to me some more plz

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

2 posted 2008-05-06 08:46 AM

alright hopfully the better first line explains some. see its about my best friend/ex bf.

Britt_Brat
Junior Member

since 2008-03-05

Posts 37
Knoxville, TN

3 posted 2008-05-06 02:31 PM

wow this is what im currently going through i know how you feel

Is it to be true that you would hurt me

Britt_Brat
Junior Member

since 2008-03-05

Posts 37
Knoxville, TN

4 posted 2008-05-06 02:33 PM

i love it. i love the fact i can read sumthing and know what that person was or is going through

Is it to be true that you would hurt me

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

5 posted 2008-05-06 06:55 PM

great write!! and welcome to pip!

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

6 posted 2008-05-06 07:45 PM

welcome to pip, great poem but it feels like there should be more... or is it just me??

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

7 posted 2008-05-11 02:31 AM

Welcome to Passions Tes

i like this great 1st post
hope to read more
Krysti

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