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Teen Poetry #8

stories of the past but as present of the future

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2008-05-04 12:06 PM

Do you know what it feel like to be chased?
Can you relate to being left as waste?

My eyes are blinded from the lies.
The voice inside is not the only thing that dies.

Greatness comes from inside.
Then does badness come from the outside?

Strong is what I'm not
I'm giving you everything that I've got

The voices are stuck inside my head.
They keep me stuck here on this bed

I see angels fall to demons,just like the falling of the rain
You'd think that there lives would be fixed without pain

I think i can feel myself rise and burn
To the ground and then it's to late to turn

Dying is not a way to show
That life can easily come and go

Take good care of this i say
Or the creator will make you pay

Drying out of words is where I've come
I am sorry but this poem is done......

keagan

earn your freedom of the charge of sacrificing your life for others

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-05-04 12:21 PM

Wow Keagan!! I do mean it when i say that, this is the most amazing poem ever!! The emotion and creativity behind your words are stunningly, amazing! this poem is deffinently going to my library. Great work!!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-05-04 05:58 PM

Lovely poem. I really like the last few stanza's, great job.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

3 posted 2008-05-05 03:11 AM

wow, amazing poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

Tripp'ncutie
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since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

4 posted 2008-05-05 03:17 PM

that was really awsome, after the day i have had it really placed a spell on me. which is what a good poem should do. make you say wow. i liked the flow it had too, and the ending the was interesting. did that just happen or was there a specific reason either way it was sweet.

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