drunken man at the bus stop

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Teen Poetry #8

drunken man at the bus stop

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

0 posted 2008-04-19 06:58 PM

i once met a man in a bus stop,
he spoke many words of wisdom,
in reality he was a drunken mess,
don't really know where he came from.

but in that mumbled chaos,
spoke some very fine words indeed.
he tried to give me a lecture,
he did infact succeed.

'there is a very thin line, between love and hate'
he slurred his drunken words,
he looked through me, not quite at me,
what he said next, went unheard.

i was in a trance unable to speak,
your face appareared before me,
i thought of us and how we've changed,
and i then began to see.

long ago i loved you,
i gave you all i could,
i trusted you with everything,
did exactly as i should.

you ripped out my heart,
cruelly through it on the floor,
stamped on it hard,
watching floods of tears pour.

love turned to hate,
i burned all your clothes,
shredded the letters,
and then the photos,

but then i heard that man,
and what he had to say,
i realised i love you,
in some sick and twisted way.

if i didn't love you,
i wouldn't really care,
but i want you to be mine again,
this time i refuse to share.

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2008-04-20 07:02 AM

COMES RUNNING IN TAKES A SEAT, GETS UP SCREAMS A LIL, RUNS bACK TO HER SEAT GETS UP AND RUNS OVER TOO BEL TO GIVE HER THE BIGGEST HUG..

Welcome back Bell so good to hav ya back,.. awesome work as always you are such a talented writer in fact you could wipe the floor with me three times over lol..

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-05-04 10:23 PM

Wow this is my first time reading your work and i thought this was really good. Its great to have a awesome writer back.. hopefully you'll stay so i can read more of your work.

Have a great day!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-05-05 02:29 PM

Absolutly brilliant!

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

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