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wisdomofthesword
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the last place on earth

0 posted 2008-04-29 07:34 PM


no where to turn to
no where to run
I can't take it any more
but what to do is begon

I'm a cowboy in a city where I don't belong
I don't fit in
I don't don't know how long I can stay here
yet still survive

with no one to talk and no one that understands
somethings got to happen
before it's to late
to late late to go beck
to late to go forward
I'm stuck in a rut and I can't get out

I gotta get outa here
but I don't know how
some one tell me what to do
give me a helping hand
all my life I've been helping and counseling
but now I need help and there's no one around

why can no one understand my pain
understand my fear
understand my desirer

my horse and my gun
my guitar and and a stage
you say my life is so interesting
all these things I can do

to ride and wrangle
play and to sing
sleeping in hay
you wish you where me
if only you could see
these are only things keeping me sane

the bottle is my friend
this cigarette my peace
someone please help me
stuck in a place with no heart
I can't stay here
I can't live here
I don't belong

I've got to get out
get on a plane
but my dreams are out of reach
just out of grasp
so close yet so far away

some one please help me
I'm asking advise
I'v finally caved
I'll give it all away
for just one taste of freedom

will my dreams come
working hard sweet and bone
to reach those goals
getting further and further away

shall I live a lie or soldier on
some one please help me
because I don't know what to do



I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
1 posted 2008-04-29 09:37 PM


I can deffinetly relate to this, and im sure lots of others can. If u need help understand something I'll try my hardest to help. I know this feeling like the back of my hand and I also know that i hate it. I'm here if u need me...and great poem btw.


              {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

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since 2008-01-31
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Small town, Illinois
2 posted 2008-04-29 09:51 PM


I know how you feel dude. I know this feeling all too well. Im just like the oppisite of you. I'm a city boy stuck in the middle of corn fields. It feels all too weird for me. Too sereny, too clam. People are interested in my storys of back home in Chicago. But that was my daily life. Now im stuck here to adapt to the world around me.. If you need someone to talk to.. im here *holds out hand* Hope things go well with ya'

Oh and nice poem!! lol

~Zach~



wisdomofthesword
Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224
the last place on earth
3 posted 2008-04-30 08:28 PM


mmmm corn. thanks guys its good to know i can always talk to my pip buddies

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

Tripp'ncutie
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since 2008-05-05
Posts 73
minnasota
4 posted 2008-05-05 03:29 PM


ok so i can realate to the counceling and getting turning around to find no one to help you. i am actually at that pt. um but i am here if you need any thing just spill and i will listen.
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