Teen Poetry #8 |
I'm asking for help |
wisdomofthesword Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224the last place on earth |
no where to turn to no where to run I can't take it any more but what to do is begon I'm a cowboy in a city where I don't belong I don't fit in I don't don't know how long I can stay here yet still survive with no one to talk and no one that understands somethings got to happen before it's to late to late late to go beck to late to go forward I'm stuck in a rut and I can't get out I gotta get outa here but I don't know how some one tell me what to do give me a helping hand all my life I've been helping and counseling but now I need help and there's no one around why can no one understand my pain understand my fear understand my desirer my horse and my gun my guitar and and a stage you say my life is so interesting all these things I can do to ride and wrangle play and to sing sleeping in hay you wish you where me if only you could see these are only things keeping me sane the bottle is my friend this cigarette my peace someone please help me stuck in a place with no heart I can't stay here I can't live here I don't belong I've got to get out get on a plane but my dreams are out of reach just out of grasp so close yet so far away some one please help me I'm asking advise I'v finally caved I'll give it all away for just one taste of freedom will my dreams come working hard sweet and bone to reach those goals getting further and further away shall I live a lie or soldier on some one please help me because I don't know what to do I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I can deffinetly relate to this, and im sure lots of others can. If u need help understand something I'll try my hardest to help. I know this feeling like the back of my hand and I also know that i hate it. I'm here if u need me...and great poem btw. {~~*~~} {&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}} |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I know how you feel dude. I know this feeling all too well. Im just like the oppisite of you. I'm a city boy stuck in the middle of corn fields. It feels all too weird for me. Too sereny, too clam. People are interested in my storys of back home in Chicago. But that was my daily life. Now im stuck here to adapt to the world around me.. If you need someone to talk to.. im here *holds out hand* Hope things go well with ya' Oh and nice poem!! lol ~Zach~ |
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wisdomofthesword Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224the last place on earth |
mmmm corn. thanks guys its good to know i can always talk to my pip buddies I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so |
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Tripp'ncutie Member
since 2008-05-05
Posts 73minnasota |
ok so i can realate to the counceling and getting turning around to find no one to help you. i am actually at that pt. um but i am here if you need any thing just spill and i will listen. |
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